Thursday, November 27, 2008

Tolerance

To me tolerance is the ablilty to put up with. It is the way to tolerate anyone or anything instead of putting force upoin it, or have to deal with it. I agree with what Forster said, there can not be love in this world. Think about it, how can we love something we have no idea of? We can see tolerance everywhere and anytime, just look around, we can see tolerance, teachers putting up with students, students putting up with homework. In conclusion, I think the world needs tolerance to function, without it, the world would be a mess.

2 comments:

Ms. Lindsay said...

To put up with what? Your topic sentence is incomplete. Your second sentence does not make sense. Forster did not say there could not be love--he proposed tolerance as a foundation for building civiliation instead of love. The examples and conclusion are much better than the beginning--this needs revision.

purplecows said...

I like this essay on tolerance. I think it gives good examples if who and how people in our everyday lives put up with tolerance.